
Whether you call it your “elevator speech” or “30-second intro” or “audio logo” as a small business owner you know that you need to have a way to introduce yourself that captures the interest of prospective clients.
If the person to whom you’ve introduced yourself says, “Wow, that sounds interesting. Tell me more!” you can be pretty sure that you have a good elevator speech.
The problem is what do you say in response to “Tell me more”?
The Problem: What Most of Us Do
In my experience most of us hear “tell me more” as a request to hear how we help our clients and customers. And we’re off and running into what I call “Processland.”
Here are two examples of a “Processland” response:
From a financial planner:
“I talk to you about your financial goals. Things like retirement, sending your kids to college, and other plans you have. Then I’ll look at how your money is currently invested and whether you need to change how your investments are allocated …”
From a personal trainer:
“During our first visit we’ll get your height and weight and key measurements. Then we’ll talk about your fitness goals; what your resting heart rate and respiration should be for your age, what a healthy weight range would be, and how long it will take for you to get to your optimal weight …”
Now if you’re the person explaining the process, you may be enjoying this part of the conversation because you are talking about something you really love: your work!
Alas for the prospective customer, most process-oriented explanations are deadly dull and do NOT give them the information that they REALLY want to hear.
What Does Your Prospective Customer Really Want to Hear?
When a prospective customer responds with “Tell me more,” what they are really asking for is:
“Can you help someone like me with my particular problem?”
And that’s a good question. It’s a good question especially when your prospect has already tried doing a few things to solve their problem and whatever they’ve tried hasn’t done the trick. So they may be feeling a little discouraged and stressed out about their situation.
They may be thinking, “Oh she’s helped other people but my situation is a particularly difficult one that other experts haven’t been able to help me with.”
When we talk about our generic process we aren’t enabling our prospect to see themselves in the picture.
Fortunately there’s a relatively easy response that paints this picture for your prospect. You tell a story in which your prospect gets to be the main character in a mini-adventure.
How to Create a Mini-Adventure Story Starring Your Prospect
Now most people can tell a story but not everyone can tell a really compelling story. And that’s what you need to do, tell a story that keeps your prospect’s interest. So I’m going to start by giving you the basic template for a great adventure story.
Beginning: Our hero is a good person who wants his or her situation to be better.
Example: Luke Skywalker lives with his aunt and uncle who are farmers on the planet Tatooine. Luke is bored and wants to leave and learn to be a pilot at the Imperial Academy but hasn’t yet because he knows his uncle needs his help running the farm.
Call to Adventure: An opportunity to improve things appears. Often the opportunity is to attain something even bigger than our hero believed possible.
Example: Luke is intrigued by a message for help sent by a beautiful princess. He becomes apprenticed to a former Jedi Knight, Obi-Wan Kenobi. He accompanies Obi-Wan to rescue the princess and learns about his father who was a great Jedi knight.
Encountering and Overcoming Obstacles: Our hero encounters difficulties along the way but overcomes those difficulties.
Example: Luke has lots of adventures rescuing Princess Leia and fighting with the rebel forces.
Happy Ending: By meeting and overcoming obstacles our hero learns about his strengths and what he is capable of. He becomes a braver, wiser, and better person.
Example: With the help of Obi-Wan, Luke destroys the Imperial Death Star winning a crucial battle for the Rebel Alliance. Luke joins the Rebel Alliance is honored for his bravery by Princess Leia and the Rebel leaders.
Now you’re going to apply the Mini-adventure story structure to create a success story in which your prospect gets to be the hero. I’m going to use the personal trainer as an example so you can see how you could apply it to your own business.
Beginning: Our hero is a good person who wants their situation to be better.
Example: “Most of my clients are men and women in their early and mid-40s who find themselves gaining 10, 20, even 30 pounds. They’re really frustrated because the things they used to do to manage their weight such as cutting out dessert or working out an extra day a week no longer work.“
Call to Adventure: An opportunity to improve things appears. Often the opportunity is to attain something even bigger than our hero believed possible. Note: When you are talking to a prospective customer, the opportunity is often learning from you what is possible.
Example: “People call me because something happens that makes it impossible to keep ignoring the extra weight. For example, just yesterday a woman called me in tears because her 40th high school reunion was coming up and even her “fat jeans” didn’t fit anymore.”
Encountering and Overcoming Obstacles: Our hero encounters difficulties along the way but overcomes those difficulties. Note: Here’s where you get to share how your approach works when other approaches don’t.
Example: “One of my success secrets is getting my clients to set exciting goals in which weight loss is a by-product. Most people do pretty well during the first six weeks but after that they get bored and fall back into their old routines. So we set a more exciting goal. You know the woman who wanted to look great for her high school reunion? She wanted to learn Ball Room dancing so I had her enroll in dance lessons.
End: By meeting and overcoming obstacles our hero learns about his strengths and what he is capable of. He becomes a braver, wiser, and better person.
Example: When I help clients reach a bigger, more exciting goal they are not only happier with how they look and feel, they are more confident and feel better about themselves because they did something they didn’t think they were capable of. I’ve noticed that the clients who experience inner and outer changes have been the most successful at maintaining their new weight and staying healthy.
Now It’s Your Turn
Using the mini-adventure template, write a story that you tell prospects when they ask to hear more about what you do.
Bottom Line
When a prospective client responds to your elevator speech with “That’s interesting, tell me more” they are NOT saying, “Tell me the process you will use to help me solve my problem.” They are saying, “Tell me a story about how you helped someone like me overcome the challenges I’m facing.”
The next time a prospect says, “Tell me more,” try telling them a story in which you help them be the hero. And see if that doesn’t increase the number who say, “That sounds great, when do we start!”
In this way you both get a happy ending.